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Delightful story - the voice is perfect!

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Love the way you nailed the speech.

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Dec 15, 2023Liked by A E Deakin

Absolutely perfect and the voice is wonderful! Reminds me of a ghost tour I took in Savannah, GA. Really a sweet little story.

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That was a ton of fun! I really liked the nugget about Poor Sorry Phil, overall the piece was a lovely bit of cozy gothic.

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Nov 29, 2023Liked by A E Deakin

I liked it! I kept waiting for a scary part, even though you said it was a cosy. :) I loved the pencil drawing, too. It was a good choice to set the scene.

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I'm always a fan of ghostly things. Thanks for writing and sharing it 👻

I liked the choice of tour guide narration, and the dancing ghost was cute. It's always good to try things out of our comfort zone - I'll be publishing a story on my Substack this weekend which strays outside my usual territory too.

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I used Spotify, they had a robot voice, pretty good. Better than my noise anyway.

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