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Scary stuff I like this a lot.

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That is delicious! The acceptance of the parasite at the end was chilling. Well done Deaks. I'm looking forward to seeing your other shorts too, congratulations on the February challenge.

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I enjoyed that, thank you.

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Mar 19Liked by A E Deakin

Good story..I wanted the ending to be a bit more dramatic tho. Could be made into a novella with more character development- and a bloody ending!!!

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