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Terra's avatar

Hi there!! Great story!!

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A E Deakin's avatar

Thanks! Glad you enjoyed it.

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V.L. Augustin's avatar

Loved this, so many great lines!

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Lisa Whitaker's avatar

Absolutely fun-tastic story!

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A E Deakin's avatar

Thank you!

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Paula Mason's avatar

This would make a great Twilight Zone episode.

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Ryan Bush's avatar

I agree, I could definitely see this making a nice scary episode. "Hi there!" and then it fades to black at the end...

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A E Deakin's avatar

Thanks! Never seen Twilight Zone but feel like I should now.

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Paula Mason's avatar

Good grief. I'm older than I thought.

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A E Deakin's avatar

I think that about myself every day 😅

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Paula Mason's avatar

Oh yeah. Gosh I miss the twilight zones. And outer limits and the crypt keeper! Guess that's why I love these little freaky short stories so much

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