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K.M. Bennett's avatar

I liked this a lot, but I am a sucker for creepy corporate vibes a la Severance. Also, I think it was poignant that she was a woman literally invisible at work. Women already have such a hard time being able to bring their full selves to corporate life, let alone if they are caregivers. Getting our ideas recognized, getting promotions, pay equity. There are so many aspects that can make us not feel "seen." And yet, we are encouraged to ignore it all, and to join the rest with not seeing in order to be accepted.

I also loved the language of the "merger" that they used to describe this process, also hinting to the way that corporate jargon can be used to mask terrible acts.

And the fact that it was "all in the email"? A hilarious take on the absurdity of corporate culture.

Anyway, thank you for the read!! This was a cool one.

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A E Deakin's avatar

Loving this analysis! Not watched Severence yet but it's on my list. Glad you enjoyed the read - was certainly fun to write.

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K.M. Bennett's avatar

Based on your story's themes, I think you'd love it! :)

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Eliza Small's avatar

Reminds me of a Twillight Zone episode

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A E Deakin's avatar

That's huge praise, thank you! Love what I've seen of The Twilight Zone.

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nibbins the cat's avatar

A good hefty dollop of weird is always a good thing. It reminded me of those 0s/70s strange stories typr comic books. Great fun.

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A E Deakin's avatar

Thank you! Gotta stay weird, right?

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Pedro Santos's avatar

Almost reads like a screenplay. (In a good way, ofc). Great work.

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