This story is very intriguing because Dan's appearance is mysterious. Who is Dan and how does he fit in with Yasmin? I love how Dan and Yasmin was in the nightclub and the next she's outside the nightclub with Cynthie...interesting. I want to know What Dan whispered in Yasmin's ear for her to leave. I personally believe that spell she used on a classmate may had something to do with Dan showing up as her blind date. The cliffhanger surrounds Dan knowing who she was all the long. Another amazing story to add to my book collection. I.D.
Dang, this is dark. And on point. Romance tropes are disturbing... *blush* This is excellent, though, like always.
This is the first thing I’ve read on this site, bring more on!
Thanks! Lots more stories coming.
This story is very intriguing because Dan's appearance is mysterious. Who is Dan and how does he fit in with Yasmin? I love how Dan and Yasmin was in the nightclub and the next she's outside the nightclub with Cynthie...interesting. I want to know What Dan whispered in Yasmin's ear for her to leave. I personally believe that spell she used on a classmate may had something to do with Dan showing up as her blind date. The cliffhanger surrounds Dan knowing who she was all the long. Another amazing story to add to my book collection. I.D.
Need to read it again ( always the sign of a good short story…)